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Is there anything as sweet
as childish love?
Giddy
butterflies in your stomach
can't help but blush kind of love?
Sometimes I wish I hadn't lost that feeling-
you wouldn't haunt my dreams,
I wouldn't be homesick for comfort.
But what is love without trial
trial without triumph
triumph without growth?
the truth of it is
childlike love is lost
only by the person who thinks too much.
Love is not supposed to be complex.
©2004-2009 ~GigglingTot
:icongigglingtot:

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something a friend asked me to put up... and something that I wrote just... because, like many, I've got questions I wish I had answers to. i like how this turned out though

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:icondeirdrachaeli:
I love the simplicity that you convey not only through your topic, but through your straightforward wording and phrasing. This doesn't try to overdramatize anything, yet you still perfectly illustrate your thoughts. Very nice.
:icongigglingtot:
thank you.

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"only when the last tree has died, and the last river been poisoned, and the last fish been caught will we realize that we can't eat money." based on a Cree saying
:iconbella-rms:
i like this poem because i think that it is one that most people would be able to relate with, even if they hadnt really thought about it before. This is the first poem that i have ever read on deviant, i usually look at photography and drawings, but this has inspired me to look at more written pieces. Thanks for making me aware of the talents on this site in this area, by thinking up such a poem.
:icongigglingtot:
thank you... perhaps you should thank the friend who told me to put this one up. i wasn't going to because i hate sharing my work. i'm glad you enjoyed it, and hopefully your search through other poems will leave you satisfied.

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"only when the last tree has died, and the last river been poisoned, and the last fish been caught will we realize that we can't eat money." based on a Cree saying
:iconbella-rms:
lol, alright then, i thank your friend for making you submit it!

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ugh sushi and donuts...who does that?

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